Tuesday, April 21, 2009

descriptive language.

It was two o’clock, I can see that the moon was hiding behind the clouds and stars were gloomy, shielding their bright light. Ina was still on the desk, indulging her restless eyes into the large and thick book of Cutnell & Johnson. I was hoping to continue my study on Acids and Bases but could not bear it anymore. My eyes became so heavy, heavier than the Cutnell and I barely opened it. My mouth was gasping for Oxygen every five seconds. Not to burden myself, I jumped into my soft single bed and grabbed my pillow. Zzzz…

the end. Haha.

I don't think it's a descriptive language.

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  1. describe how you jumped on ur bed. that'll add the descriptive-ness of ur descriptive essay..hoho

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  2. waahh..acids and bases plus cutnell
    descriptive enough for me
    haha

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  3. thira--> hahaahahahaha. no need for that i think.

    palee--> glad to know that. hakhak

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  4. wah,very impressive~!hahaha..

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  5. ruby--> i found it very insulting. wakaka..

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